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The Taste of Chocolate by ~bloodyangel361:iconbloodyangel361:



A crack rings out through the utterly silent room. Scraps of chocolate softly fall onto the floor. He hears the phantom sounds of beeps and buttons near him. Maybe – probably – he has gone insane. But was he sane in the first place? Nobody knows now.

Mello slowly chews on his brown delicacy. The crunches seem to loudly echo in the empty room. His hand loosely grips the candy bar while his eyes scan the air. It was unusually quiet here.  His mind clicks and he remembers that Matt isn’t here anymore. His machinery and infatuation with technology had always made a racket. Now it is eerily calm for the blond’s preference.

Suddenly, he spits out the chocolate and growls. The horrible taste lingers on his tongue, and he hates it. His gloved hand grips the bar harder and harder before it breaks into tons of pieces.

“Fuck you, goddamn bitter chocolate. Now I need to get another fucking one.”

At least his potty mouth didn’t change. If there is one thing that will stay the same, it will be that. He grabs his convenient store bag and grabs another one of the confectionary sweets. His fingers quickly tear off the plastic so the top half of the chocolate was exposed. Mello’s teeth sink into it, and no more does the bitter taste enter his mouth. He kicks his leather-clad legs up onto the coffee table in satisfaction.

When his thoughts linger to his former partner, the food abruptly changes its flavor again. Choking it down, he roughly throws it into the garbage while grumbling about changing the brand. He goes out and buys a different brand. However, when he comes home and thinks about Matt, the process repeats.

“What the hell is wrong with these stupid makers now?”

He complains, but is told that they make it the same way as always. This is confusing and means that Mello is wrong. Mello is NEVER wrong.

On the other hand, he never did quite figure out what was happening when the situation repeated over and over again.
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First attempt at a MattMello.

Didn't come out as I wanted it to, so you may shoot me for ruining this wonderful pairing.

Inspiration from the word 'strawberries'.

Matt and Mello © Tsugumi Ohba and Takeshi Obata
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OOOOH I LOVE IT! xD

BEAUTIFUL! MOAR! Your writing is so much fun. :3 Descriptive, and I like the way you write Mello!

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"The real reason I murdered all those people is as follows...
I simply could not allow such ridiculous names to exist." -Beyond Birthday
xD I hate this. Didn't come out how I wanted it, ashdksas.

NOOOO. Well, I have been writing, just not posting it here, rofl. I've been neglecting dA ever since I joined this forum I found.

I WILL COME BACK.

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T^T Well I liked it!!! xD

Oh, it's okay. I've been neglecting dA a little bit myself, I've been so busy with everything else. >,> I've been in the hospital like...six times in the last month.

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"The real reason I murdered all those people is as follows...
I simply could not allow such ridiculous names to exist." -Beyond Birthday
DDDD: ARE YOU OKAY?

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Yeeeeaaaaah, it's just the normal aliments. The only thing that's sucked about it this time is that they like...locked me in a freaking clean room. O.O And like...the nurses are always treating me like I'm made of paper. xDDDD It's kinda funny to joke around with them, though! :giggle:

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"The real reason I murdered all those people is as follows...
I simply could not allow such ridiculous names to exist." -Beyond Birthday
Awww, they're just trying to help. D: But I admit it's fun messing with them. XD

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Sooooo much fun!

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"The real reason I murdered all those people is as follows...
I simply could not allow such ridiculous names to exist." -Beyond Birthday
*points gun to your head* Prepare to die! *starts smiling before breaking down laughing* Just making fun. I liked it a lot, though I have read better ones. *wipes away tears* It is different in a very good way. Quite short though... Make them a little longer and let the couple be together sometimes too. Then you'll go straight to one of the five best on my "100 best yaoi-writers ever"-list. And that is a big shot!

Before you say anything: Yes, I DO know a lot about yaoi, and I am a perv (but only 75% of the time, the rest is saved to my friends, writing and drawing to dA and to just survive :D )... I search dA every day to find new stories, but I mostly can only feel the great rush from the stories, from reading my own again and again. (I rarely find people writing passionately enough.)

I am writing yaoi myself, so if you love yaoi, go and take a look! And don't hate me from not doing any MattMello-stories yet! I haven't made any ItaSasu or ItaNaru, which are some of the couples I adore, either! I don't have that much spare time! I still got school and chores at home!

I'll watch you if I find more good things in your gallery. If this is your first deviation ever, I will watch you anyway. *smiles sweetly* BTW, I couldn't have shot you anyway. I don't have a gun, it is my annoying brother's painball-gun. (I wouldn't fire ONE shot, unless it was terribly needed! I was the goal for him to hit for years, and I know how it hurts!! I still got the scars on my soul. :cries: )

I hope you can use that advice. Have fun writing! Please go see my stories, if you like yaoi too!!
And if we turn out to be friends, you can call me Z. (What can I call you...?)

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Thank you. Personally, I do agree with you on that there are a lot of other, better ones than this piece. Although, you have to admit that Death Note is a hard fandom to write for, eh? Um, I intentionally made this short because it's supposed to leave the reader time to think about what happened and why things are happening the way that they are in the story. The couple was also not together at all because (assuming that you don't know what happened in Death Note) one of the characters of said couple is dead.

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