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The blade of death
struck me within the war.
I was in a dream,
and I never woke up.

My body fell against
the open canvas,
creating a beautiful painting
with such dark crimson.

Surroundings disappear,
your tears raining around me.
Condemned to this life,
I am.

The deep scars
of the dark history
of my people
began to bleed again.

Hands creeping up my spine,
tingling sensations running
through my veins.
Shivers run.

Forceful demands
fill my blank mind.
I waited...
and waited.

His breath filled my being.
My mind void of any happiness.
The drips of your tears
again fall eternally.

For you I would withstand.
For you I would try.
For you I would suffer.
For you I would live.

For you I would...
©2007-2009 ~bloodyangel361
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I think you can understand. It's been awhile since I've written anything, so it's really crappy. I could only hope you understand my poem.

I decided to write this after I was rping with my buddies, and I heard bad news, which led me to become emo and write this poem.

For you I would...

:blackrose:
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~Ninja-Akashi:iconNinja-Akashi: Mar 10, 2007, 8:18:25 AM
Your poem is awesome... -_-

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~bloodyangel361:iconbloodyangel361: Mar 10, 2007, 9:34:50 AM
Thanks. ^__^

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Mood: Shame ~Kai-no-Shitai:iconKai-no-Shitai: Mar 10, 2007, 12:26:27 PM
:cries: I'm sorry! I made you sad :cries: Even Kaku wrote sumtin about it, Saso gave me a note...WHY! I love you guys! Humans are supposed to care THIS much! No one ever has 0_0

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~bloodyangel361:iconbloodyangel361: Mar 10, 2007, 12:30:44 PM
HIDAN-CHAN, GET YOUR BUTT INTO THE CHATROOM THIS INSTANT!!

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~Kai-no-Shitai:iconKai-no-Shitai: Mar 10, 2007, 1:28:32 PM
ok ^^

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"If you save the dust from someone's footprints, one day they'll come back."-Gunta(Tobi, an African American Slave)
~Ninja-Akashi:iconNinja-Akashi: Mar 10, 2007, 2:12:58 PM
What made you sad?

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~bloodyangel361:iconbloodyangel361: Mar 10, 2007, 4:19:02 PM
Well, one of my friends may leave dA and move to the Philippines, and never go on ever again.

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~Ninja-Akashi:iconNinja-Akashi: Mar 10, 2007, 5:58:03 PM
Oh... O.O

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